Kia Ora Korban. This magic box poem is awesome. Ka pai! I like how you added heaps of information and how you described it clearly. Why did you put people having a car crash? You being a dragon is cool. You have clearly worked hard on this. Next time you could improve your spelling. For example you said to instead of two. Goodbye!
Kia Ora Korban.
ReplyDeleteThis magic box poem is awesome. Ka pai! I like how you added heaps of information and how you described it clearly. Why did you put people having a car crash? You being a dragon is cool. You have clearly worked hard on this. Next time you could improve your spelling. For example you said to instead of two. Goodbye!