Learning Intentions for Science
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Literacy
As part of our rocky shore unit we will also use our literacy skills to read and learn about the rocky shore and to write an information report on a rocky shore creature.
Writing
We are learning to write an information report about an animal.
We are learning to use our writing skills across the curriculum.
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Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Thursday, 29 March 2018
The Rocky Shore Trip
We have been learning about the rocky shore for the past few weeks. This is my recount about the rocky shore.
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Kia ora Korban
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing your recount about our trip. I'm glad you enjoyed exploring the rock pools and seeing all the creatures. I liked that you sequenced you events in your recount and that you told the reader about which creatures you found. You next step is to describe things more and use some interesting words and language. For example, it would have been good if you had described what some of the creatures looked and felt like. It is good to see you using paragraphs. Ka pai.