Tuesday, 12 February 2019
A Moment In Time
In Rūma Tahi we were writing a moment in time. I found it pretty easy.
Bump Bump Bump splash I flipped off the biscutt and landed back first into the water. Deep Deep Down I went. With my eyes closed I could hear a little ripple sound when I was floating up. I could feel little bits of weed floating up from the bottom and slithering around my feet. I could taste the lake water in my mouth. I found myself up at top of the water. I took a deep breath to get the air back in my lungs. I yelled yeah woohoo I could smell the gas from the boat flying through the air.
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Wow Korban, you took me right back to the moment in time when I was watching you on the biscuit! I wonder what you could see when your head burst up through the water? Great writing Korb.
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