Lightning Never Strikes Twice

WALT use adjectives and similes to describe a setting clearly

 I was sitting in the corner of the windmill listening to the rain crashing onto the roof. I was waiting for it to stop until BOOM SNAP CRASH!!! I raced to the dirty window to peer through and I saw a tree lying on the ground in two large pieces. I started to panic and completely froze when i heard a huge creak coming from outside. After a few seconds I realised that it was just the windmill working away. BOOM I raced to the window again to see what damage had happened. There was none. I kept on peering out the window to make sure. A few moments later I saw that a huge tree was blocking the door. I sat in the corner thinking what to do. Suddenly I heard something. It was getting louder. It sounded like water in a river. “OH NO” I screamed. Water was flowing in from upstairs. “HELP HELP HELP” I yelled “HELP ME PLEASE”!!! Now the water was up to my knees so i made a dash for the stairs to get to the top room. I grabbed the ladder in the corner and climbed up to the chandelier. 10 minutes later the water started to flow into the top room. I was looking around the room to think what do. Suddenly I screamed “YES” because I had found a string to pull that leads to the attic. I pulled it and climbed up as fast as I could. The thunder was still booming away like crazy which made everything worse. There was a window in the attic so I smashed it open and climbed down the tiles of the windmill. Soaking wet I moved the big tree and let all the water out. I raced in side and quickly covered up the hole that let the water in. I ended up living which is good and I am never spending another thunderstorm in a windmill ever again.

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