Hello Korban. Lincoln here. I liked your sea week work maybe next time you can make your pictures more appropriate for school. I liked how you put what you liked doing at the beach. good bye :)
Kia ora Korban, I really liked your sea week writing, it was detailed and you wrote with feeling. It was quite hard to read some of the writing though. Perhaps you could consider your reader when you are choosing a font to use, also when you are choosing the font size and colour. I am looking forward to reading more of your writing throughout the year. Be proud of your learning Korban, you are doing a great job!!
Hi Mum this is Korban. Thank you for commenting on my sea week writing. I thought that the font was all good. Thank you again for making your commment be kind, positive and helpful comment.
Hello Korban. Lincoln here. I liked your sea week work maybe next time you can make your pictures more appropriate for school. I liked how you put what you liked doing at the beach. good bye :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Korban, I really liked your sea week writing, it was detailed and you wrote with feeling. It was quite hard to read some of the writing though. Perhaps you could consider your reader when you are choosing a font to use, also when you are choosing the font size and colour. I am looking forward to reading more of your writing throughout the year. Be proud of your learning Korban, you are doing a great job!!
ReplyDeleteLove Mum.
Hi Mum this is Korban. Thank you for commenting on my sea week writing. I thought that the font was all good. Thank you again for making your commment be kind, positive and helpful comment.
DeleteBye Mum!!!!!!!!!!!!