Persuasive writing - why we should have pets.

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing about why we should have pets.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	Pets Are A Good Idea
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	Have you ever been smooched by a cat well I have and it is FLUFFY!!!
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly, pets can keep you company when you are sad or annoyed. With my dog when i’m sad he keeps me company. Whenever I sleep in my brothers bed the cat sleeps with me which makes me good.
	Secondly, most pets are really fluffy. I like to pat my pets but my chickens won’t let me. My dog is my fluffiest animal I have. There are a lot of fluffy animals around the world.
	Thirdly, pets can do very funny things. For example when one of my friends came over he told my dog to sit but he rolled over and no one taught him how to roll over.
	Finally, pets are really fun to play with. with my pets only 2 out of 7 like to play especially my dog. When I’m sad my dog cheers me up so does my cat sort of.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In conclusion, I think it’s a great idea to have a pet. Pets are a great thing in life.  pets are fun to play with, pets can do funny things, most pets are really fluffy and pets can keep you company.